Character Creation and Setting Discussion

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Sep 3, 2025 3:42 pm
4 Years Ago
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Cal looked from the datapad to the dispatcher, blinking, confusion evident on his face. The man, a lean angular faced elf with an immaculate uniform and meticulously cared for hair nodded slightly. "I have verified it three times, Major Tan... It is authentic." Cal's confused expression did not leave his face as he absently handed the pad back to the courier. The elf took the pad and immediately moved off along the fortifications while Cal stared out past the wall, to the plain where the Coalition arrayed it's strength.

Desperation. Cal knew the feeling... knew it's ability to push a person past lines and moral barriers into a place where true freedom existed. A freedom free of the consequences of action. A freedom terrifying to behold. But this... Cal heard the approach of Gnurl as the massive ogre asked pardon squeezing between troops moving with brisk purpose across the wall top. The imposing man stepped next to Cal letting his giant war hammer clang to the wall as Gnurl used it to lean and gaze out at the Coalition forces.

Silence passed as the two men stared. A flurry of preparations echoed all around them. At length, Gnurl sighed loudly and spoke in his gravely voice. "'s True, Cal?" Cal turned to look at the ogre who remained staring out across the field. The crimson light of the setting sun cast shadows on Gnurl's face, making him seem older, weary and weatherworn. Cal nodded, unable to speak the words. Gnurl continued, "Creed... D'Bees is a ting... But dis..." Cal nodded in agreement.

"...I can't..." Cal began, Gnurl turned and leveled a stare at Cal. His bloodshot eyes showing a weariness that went beyond mere exhaustion. Still, the ogre's eyes carried a compassion that so many could miss from such an imposing figure. "...You don't av to Cal. I'll stan in place. Yer tired... Rest... Sleep... Think abou yer family." Cal read the ogre's message under his words. Gnurl was going to do what Cal couldn't... wouldn't. Cal regarded the ogre anew, marveling again at how this man had changed all perception Cal had held of his species. Gnurl was not lustful for battle, he didn't want to fight, he just wanted to do what needed to be done. He carried the weight when others couldn't. He held when others broke. He supported when others fled. He did the right thing when others chose the easy. He was at the heart of what Tolkeen stood for... Cal's brow furrowed. What Tolkeen used to stand for... Cal raised a hand to press against Gnurl's chest. The ogre nodded at Cal and then moved off to convene with the other battalion psychics and magicians.

Cal turned to look back out at the Coalition forces. His mind wandered as he stared blankly. Those men were evil, Cal knew. Their supremacist propaganda hid their veiled sadistic need to be in control and condemn others. They were wrong in the most fundamental way and deserved death. Still... Cal wondered if some of that condemnation would be deserved after today.

Cal continued to watch, unsure of just how much time had passed. Suddenly, he felt the rising wave of power and magic building within the walls of Tolkeen. Cal flinched as that wave crashed out from the wall and broke in the fields before the attacking army. Tears in space and reality began appearing and all literal hell broke loose. Demon's and devil's raced out of the rifts like a malevolent wave sweeping too far into shore. The sounds of distorted cries, chants and anguish made Cal wince despite the distance. A wrongess permeated the air and Cal felt his stomach turn. The Sorcerer's Revenge had begun... and Cal couldn't help but feel like the soul of Tolkeen was being ravaged as much as the soldiers of the Coalition.
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Sep 3, 2025 6:37 pm
I'm making some finishing touches. For the name, I'm settling on Goizeder Fort, without the fancy semantic name.

For the two remaining Aspects, these are I'm thinking of. Are they suitable?

Aspect 6: Graduate of the Decade
Was the best student of the decade, becoming proficient in everything the monastery offered. Has a corresponding reputation among those who know of Xanatoa's graduates, which comes with accordingly high expectations.

Aspect 7: Deception-Derailing Destiny
Where the graduate gets involved, lies and trickery go awry. This seems to take varying forms, such as liars getting tongue-tied or otherwise failing to convince the mark, truth coming out at the most inconvenient moment, the lie turning out to be true but to the detriment of the liar, or the mark and not the liar benefitting from the lie. Note that this is a two-edged sword: the quirky destiny affects both the graduate and the interlocutors.
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Sep 4, 2025 2:15 pm
I think those aspects work fine. I went ahead and approved your character.
Sep 4, 2025 8:00 pm
Seems all set then.

I was hesitant when I was joining, but I gradually became more hyped for this as I thought through the concept, and now I'm eager to start, even though the world is largely unknown to me (and so I'm expecting to play through discovery thereof both IC and OOC).
One PC I can't open though is Cal Tan.
Sep 4, 2025 11:03 pm
Sorry! I think I had made the previous sheet public. Updated! Awesome character @vicky_molokh

How do I see the other characters? I’ve been reading through things that get posted here and they’ve been great, but I don’t know how to see actual character sheets
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Sep 4, 2025 11:12 pm
At the bottom of your screen there should be a red bar with Characters, Threads, and Game Details. If you click the Characters text, it'll bring up a sub menu with each player and their character sheets. If the shert hasn't been made public though, it'll bring you to a "No Character Found" page.
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Sep 4, 2025 11:21 pm
Edmund_Balworth says:
Sorry! I think I had made the previous sheet public. Updated! Awesome character @vicky_molokh

How do I see the other characters? I’ve been reading through things that get posted here and they’ve been great, but I don’t know how to see actual character sheets
Thanks. I still get a 'no character found' when I click on Cal Tan's links.
Sep 4, 2025 11:57 pm
Sometimes the graphic is out of sync with the actual sharing.
@Edmund_Balworth just click it once then refresh the screen.
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Sep 5, 2025 12:14 pm
Wow, @Celestine! I never noticed that red bar...

OK, I think I have it now. When I went to my characters it was again not public, I clicked the public (It didn't show it as highlighted like you were talking about @Psybermagi so I just left the screen and went back and it's highlighted).
Sep 5, 2025 12:21 pm
I can now see Cal.

Now, a thought: At the moment the first chapter of the new story starts, are our PCs supposed to be already well-acquainted, or are they meeting for the first time? If it's the former, it might be nice to start a thread for how our PCs were all gathered in one place and met each other for the first time - for RP warm-up, to learn a bit about each other's PCs in an actual interaction, and to pass the time (though I expect that the thread would end up running in parallel to the actual adventure, as a flashback of sorts).

(This is, of course, just a proposal, since I'm not the GM.)
Sep 5, 2025 12:29 pm
Your characters are all members of the Tomorrow Legion, and so can be assigned to work together. So they don’t have to know each other from the outset. I’ll leave that decision up to you all.

I’ll try and get the first post up today.
Sep 5, 2025 1:17 pm
First post of the the first thread is up here.
Sep 5, 2025 3:58 pm
vicky_molokh says:
I can now see Cal.

Now, a thought: At the moment the first chapter of the new story starts, are our PCs supposed to be already well-acquainted, or are they meeting for the first time? If it's the former, it might be nice to start a thread for how our PCs were all gathered in one place and met each other for the first time - for RP warm-up, to learn a bit about each other's PCs in an actual interaction, and to pass the time (though I expect that the thread would end up running in parallel to the actual adventure, as a flashback of sorts).

(This is, of course, just a proposal, since I'm not the GM.)
I love doing flashbacks! Just so you know, I typically incorporate them in my posts. I.E. If the GM compels the Eyes That Remember Tolkeen, I would likely provide a scene from the fall before talking about how my character responds. I love to color boxes in like that.
Sep 5, 2025 5:30 pm
vicky_molokh says:

Now, a thought: At the moment the first chapter of the new story starts, are our PCs supposed to be already well-acquainted, or are they meeting for the first time? If it's the former, it might be nice to start a thread for how our PCs were all gathered in one place and met each other for the first time - for RP warm-up, to learn a bit about each other's PCs in an actual interaction, and to pass the time (though I expect that the thread would end up running in parallel to the actual adventure, as a flashback of sorts).
As an alternative to a group thing how about everyone pick one other character or we each create an intro to our character that another can tag in on. Either way each player has 2 direct relations. A > B > C > D > E > A This also allows for the relations to be a bit more personal. Maybe we use each characters "Trouble" aspect as a jumping off point.

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