OOC:
I’ve managed to get some PC time and I’ve upgraded Joe’s character sheet with his Merits, Flaws and backstory which I’ve slightly clarified. Hopefully you will feel I’ve done you a few favours as his parents provide several potential longer-term hooks (or places to put them when you’re ready) in addition to his flaws, some of them in areas Joe wouldn’t have known much about before his Awakening (and possibly still doesn’t).
A few things I haven’t got around to discussing yet; I didn’t post Joe’s summary in the general thread at first because it wasn’t ready, but then it occurred to me that, as he’s new, a good deal of ignorance about him is actually appropriate. If you feel that the other players should be trusted to separate character knowledge for themselves, I think we’re approaching the point where his summary (or a version of it?) could be posted - let me know what you think. I have also tried to ensure that the areas of his background I am poorly versed in (Akashic theory, oriental philosophy, spirit magick, spirit realms, cosmology, etc.) are precisely the areas where Joe is also ignorant, to make him easier to play in these respects.
I have assumed that, as a reincarnate, his Avatar actually has some history in more than one Tradition; although the Akashayana feel some responsibility for him (hence Lady Shrouded Mountain), his Past Lives also include experience of the Burning Times, among the Verbena but possibly others as well (the Chorus had a phase when they weren’t very fussy, ‘burn them all, God will know his own’, etc.).
After some thought I made one actual change; I bought the Burning Aura merit I was feeling drawn to, and lost a point in Mentor to pay for it, so the freebie point reckoning is still accurate. I realise this potentially acts against the Unobtrusive merit, but I reason that to remote or mundane monitoring Unobtrusive will dominate, while in person Burning Aura may start to make its presence felt, and mystic senses will of course tend to register the effects of his Aura. It could even reflect his mood; burning with fervour, power, or anger, as appropriate to the situation.
Next time I have some spare time I will try to work out his paradigm and tools, which is an area M20 seems to dig into a lot harder than previous editions.